Scanning in Metamorphoses

Gregorius Textor

Animal rationale

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There are a few lines I'm not confident about how to scan, so I'm wondering if these are correct?

~ indicates elision of the syllable before it, e.g.,

...vi|disse~homi|num = ...vi|diss' 'omi|num.

Book IV, l. 780-81

Line 780 one completely stumped me, until I guessed that the final 'que' on l. 780 should be elided and blend into 'in' on the next line.

perque vi|as vi|disse~homi|num simu|lacra fe|rarumque~
in sili|cem~ex ip|sis vi|sa con|versa Me|dusa


Book V, l. 47

(In the edition I'm reading, 'datque animos' is followed by a line break, and 'Erat' is indented as though for a new paragraph. I think, though, for poetic purposes, they count as one line.)

datque~ani|mos. Erat| Indus A|this, quem |flumine| Gange


Book VII, l. 845

semianimem et sparsas foedantem sanguine vestes

The only way I can make sense of this is to elide the 'i' in 'semi' as though 'semi animem' were two words.

semi~ani|mem~et spar|sas foe|dantem| sanguine| vestes
("sem'anim'et")

Book IX, l. 143

diffu|dit miser|anda su|um. mox| deinde "quid| autem

I guess "deinde" here must be disyllabic?

Book IX, l. 247

nam quam|quam~ipsi|us datis| hoc in|manibus| actis

("nam quam |qu'ipsī| us datis|")

Book IX, l. 633-634

mox ubi| finis ab|est, patri|am fugit| ille ne|fasque, [no elision here]
inque per|egri|na pon|it nova| moenia| terra.


It seems to me that the second syllable of 'peregrina' has to be long here, but (if so) is that just to make it fit the meter, or is it because of the 'gr'? I don't totally understand which consonant combinations make a syllable long, but I have the feeling that 'gr' usually doesn't.

That's all for now. I'm currently in Book X.
 

Pacifica

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You've scanned the lines correctly.
It seems to me that the second syllable of 'peregrina' has to be long here, but (if so) is that just to make it fit the meter, or is it because of the 'gr'? I don't totally understand which consonant combinations make a syllable long, but I have the feeling that 'gr' usually doesn't.
It doesn't always, but it sometimes does.
 

Gregorius Textor

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Good to know. Lewis says "deinde (in poetry two syll.), or dein (in poetry one syll.), adv."; L&S says "dĕindĕ, and abbrev. dein (cf. Prisc. p. 1008 P., and exin, proin—in both forms ei is monosyl. in the class. poets; as dissyl., Prud. Cath. 10, 100; id. Ditt. 1, 1),". So maybe not in all contexts.
 

Pacifica

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Not in all contexts, but usually. Places where it scans as de-in(-de) are cited as exceptions. Of course, we can't tell which pronunciation a prose author had in mind when using the word (there being no meter) but if it's almost always the shorter pronunciation in poetry, chances are that was the most common one in general as well.
 

Laurentius

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I don't have much time now but the first question is a case of synaphea, it occurs sometimes.
 
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