I probably won't go through Horsfall until afterwards.
Lines 1-45:
- candida... / luna (8-9): cf. candida Dido (I.571); candida circum / lilia (VI.708-9).
- splendet (9): first use of the verb in the work; cf. regali splendida luxu (I.637).
- proxima Circaeae raduntur litora terrae (10): golden line.
- Circaeae...terrae (10): cf. Aeaeaeque insula Circae (III.386).
- resonat (12): apparently the only transitive use; cf. resonantia saxa (III.432); resonat magnis plangoribus aether (IV.668); resonatque fragoribus aether (V.228).
- odoratam nocturna in lumina cedrum (13): chiasmus.
- arguto tenuis percurrens pectine telas (14): golden line, with chiastic alliteration.
- hinc exaudiri gemitus (15): cf. VI.557; hinc exaudiri voces (IV.460).
- rudentum (16): cf. rudentem / ...proram (III.561-2).
- in praesepibus (17): cf. ignavum fucos pecus a praesepibus arcent (I.435, of bees).
- delati in portus (22): cf. huc ubi delati portus intravimus (III.219).
- et praeter vada fervida vexit (24): alliteration of v.
- Aurora in roseis...bigis (26): cf. roseis Aurora quadrigis (VI.535).
- et in lento luctantur marmore tonsae (28): alliteration of t, l, and n.
- fluvio...amoeno (30): cf. amoena piorum / concilia (V.734-5); amoena virecta (VI.638).
- multa flavus harena (31): cf. flavo / ...auro (I.592-3); crinis flavos (IV.559); flaventisque abscissa comas (IV.590); flavum...crinem (IV.698); flavaque...oliva (V.309).
- aethera mulcebant (34): cf. mulcere...fluctus (I.66); pectora mulcet (I.153); maerentia pectora mulcet (I.197); mulcens dictis (V.464).
- fluvio sucedit opaco (36): cf. nocte tegentur opaca (IV.123); lucis habitamus opacis (VI.673).
- advena (38): cf. et nostris inluserit advena regnis? (IV.591, said by Dido).
- appulit oris (39): cf. aut quisnam ignarum nostris deus appulit oris? (III.338); hinc me digressum vestris deus appulit oris (III.715).
- expediam (40): cf. expediam dictis (III.379; VI.759).
- exordia (40): cf. quae prima exordia sumat? (IV.284).
- horrida bella (41): cf. bella, horrida bella (VI.86).
- acies actosque animis (42): alliteration.
- Tyrrhenamque manum totamque sub arma coactam (43): alliteration of m.
- maius opus moveo (45): the hope of all artists.
Lines 1-45:
- candida... / luna (8-9): cf. candida Dido (I.571); candida circum / lilia (VI.708-9).
- splendet (9): first use of the verb in the work; cf. regali splendida luxu (I.637).
- proxima Circaeae raduntur litora terrae (10): golden line.
- Circaeae...terrae (10): cf. Aeaeaeque insula Circae (III.386).
- resonat (12): apparently the only transitive use; cf. resonantia saxa (III.432); resonat magnis plangoribus aether (IV.668); resonatque fragoribus aether (V.228).
- odoratam nocturna in lumina cedrum (13): chiasmus.
- arguto tenuis percurrens pectine telas (14): golden line, with chiastic alliteration.
- hinc exaudiri gemitus (15): cf. VI.557; hinc exaudiri voces (IV.460).
- rudentum (16): cf. rudentem / ...proram (III.561-2).
- in praesepibus (17): cf. ignavum fucos pecus a praesepibus arcent (I.435, of bees).
- delati in portus (22): cf. huc ubi delati portus intravimus (III.219).
- et praeter vada fervida vexit (24): alliteration of v.
- Aurora in roseis...bigis (26): cf. roseis Aurora quadrigis (VI.535).
- et in lento luctantur marmore tonsae (28): alliteration of t, l, and n.
- fluvio...amoeno (30): cf. amoena piorum / concilia (V.734-5); amoena virecta (VI.638).
- multa flavus harena (31): cf. flavo / ...auro (I.592-3); crinis flavos (IV.559); flaventisque abscissa comas (IV.590); flavum...crinem (IV.698); flavaque...oliva (V.309).
- aethera mulcebant (34): cf. mulcere...fluctus (I.66); pectora mulcet (I.153); maerentia pectora mulcet (I.197); mulcens dictis (V.464).
- fluvio sucedit opaco (36): cf. nocte tegentur opaca (IV.123); lucis habitamus opacis (VI.673).
- advena (38): cf. et nostris inluserit advena regnis? (IV.591, said by Dido).
- appulit oris (39): cf. aut quisnam ignarum nostris deus appulit oris? (III.338); hinc me digressum vestris deus appulit oris (III.715).
- expediam (40): cf. expediam dictis (III.379; VI.759).
- exordia (40): cf. quae prima exordia sumat? (IV.284).
- horrida bella (41): cf. bella, horrida bella (VI.86).
- acies actosque animis (42): alliteration.
- Tyrrhenamque manum totamque sub arma coactam (43): alliteration of m.
- maius opus moveo (45): the hope of all artists.